Le Mess - Comedy Pilot - 30 Pages
Working Title: Le Mess
Genre: Single Camera Episodic Comedy
Content Warning: Language
Length: 30 pages
Logline: Will seems to have it all—a great job, a beautiful home, and a hot, younger wife. But his knack for turning minor annoyances into major outbursts leads to a series of hilarious conflicts and confrontations.
This is my 5th draft. Have already received feedback from my close circle and done two recorded live reads with a group to further revise.
Hoping for additional feedback from outside of my inner circle.