Feedback on my short 'Baggie' (9 pages)
Title: Baggie
Logline: Two teenage friends stumble upon a mysterious baggie, leading them into a surreal drug fueled night.
Format: short (9 pages)
This my first proper attempt at writing so any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1E6fYoky5GkWy6XHF7N6A6V1JZ6Hfg8TV/view?usp=drivesdk