[120 Pages] The Day the Clowns Cried Feedback - Historical/Psychological Thriller

Hey guys,

I thought I'd post this script here a for a final round of feedback before gearing up to submit it to festivals/competitions/etc.

Here's the logline: Inspired by true events, a grieving police detective turns obsessive as he unravels conflicting accounts of a young arsonist's involvement in the the 1944 Hartford Circus Fire 

And here's the link to the script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1hrqdPv6-djZG0C0hnzoFuEhlP3O12SE3/view?usp=drive_link

Thanks so much and looking forward to everybody's thoughts! Read as much as you'd like, no need of course to read everything haha. As for feedback, macro and micro notes are both appreciated.

Cheers!

EDIT: Oh also yes the script has a similar name to the Jerry Lewis film that recently released, but it’s temporary