I got a Ongezellig/Watamote crossover idea

I would draw it as a comic, and I have the first issue written out, what do you guys think? Would appreciate feedback of any sort https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zLRJ4Rjh9bbt03x7zB2-PEyKYYAvdCZZvkHN7PQMMHk/edit?usp=sharing