Is this readable?

Making a name plate for my friend Yosef, I wanted to make sure this reads correctly and my letter proportions aren’t off - any feedback? It’s important that the letters touch (it’s going to be a single piece of metal).

Making a name plate for my friend Yosef, I wanted to make sure this reads correctly and my letter proportions aren’t off - any feedback? It’s important that the letters touch (it’s going to be a single piece of metal).