What is something you saw in a fanfic that just took you out of it?

For me it's was them killing jazz and instantly having her become the ghost queen immediately after death. The entire story had next to nothing done with her so it just felt unearned.

For a more in depth explanation of the events The entire story was focusing on the GIW being terrorists who were faking being government members which got the actual US government involved then suddenly in the last 4 chapters they decided that because the government got involved that danny is now eliminated for being ghost king and jazz who reminder died only a few minutes ago at most was perfect for queen. Explanation given is since she has a weak heart she can only be in the ghost realm thus must be queen since she was made into a halfa (ignoring the fact that following those ideas danny or vlad should of instantly be made ruler)