How's my shayari ?

Rate my shayari Idk is it shayari or not but Just rate it Tun hi raah si , Tun hi saah si Tun hi fikarnuma , te tun hi beparwaah si Tun hi ek sacchi , chaahe zamana bewafaah si Lokan nu hunda ishq kise karan naal Par menu tere naal Bewajah si .......