Would people read comics drawn like this?

It took only 4 hours to make using procreate. The script doesn't make much sense as i hadn't thought of creating a story before i started. Can this be considered something that people would enjoy reading or do i need to add more details and make it more realistic? ( sorry for my english. I am not a native speaker.)

It took only 4 hours to make using procreate. The script doesn't make much sense as i hadn't thought of creating a story before i started. Can this be considered something that people would enjoy reading or do i need to add more details and make it more realistic? ( sorry for my english. I am not a native speaker.)